Thank you for this emotional piece. I don’t suffer from the kind of thoughts the narrator has, but my wife does, and I really recognised all those black words.
coming back to this but i really enjoyed this poem, and when i first saw it i was really inspired to make my own twine poetry and used it for reference (none of mine are done, unfortunately). it's really well made and evocative
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I needed some time after reading this, it's so powerfully affecting and really shows what Twine can do for poetry
thank you for creating this
Thank you - this kind of feedback means a lot to me.
Thank you for this emotional piece. I don’t suffer from the kind of thoughts the narrator has, but my wife does, and I really recognised all those black words.
Thank you very much for engaging with it. I hope that you and your wife are doing as well as you can.
coming back to this but i really enjoyed this poem, and when i first saw it i was really inspired to make my own twine poetry and used it for reference (none of mine are done, unfortunately). it's really well made and evocative
Thank you very much for the kind words. I'd be interested to see yours, when they're done.
https://pieartsy.itch.io/reflecting is the first one i've published :)
Thank you for sharing. I just played it and it was fantastic.
I like that
Thank you!