A poem for Toby. Made in Twine.

If you struggle with mental health issues, please talk to somebody close or your doctor. Or approach a charity such as https://www.mind.org.uk/

StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 5.0 out of 5 stars
(4 total ratings)
AuthorMighty CheBo
Made withTwine
Tagsartgame, depression, Experimental, love, Mental Health, Mouse only, poem, Short, Text based, Twine
Average sessionA few minutes
LanguagesEnglish
InputsMouse
AccessibilityOne button

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I needed some time after reading this, it's so powerfully affecting and really shows what Twine can do for poetry
thank you for creating this

Thank you - this kind of feedback means a lot to me.

Thank you for this emotional piece. I don’t suffer from the kind of thoughts the narrator has, but my wife does, and I really recognised all those black words.

Thank you very much for engaging with it. I hope that you and your wife are doing as well as you can.

coming back to this but i really enjoyed this poem, and when i first saw it i was really inspired to make my own twine poetry and used it for reference (none of mine are done, unfortunately). it's really well made and evocative

Thank you very much for the kind words. I'd be interested to see yours, when they're done.

https://pieartsy.itch.io/reflecting is the first one i've published :)

Thank you for sharing. I just played it and it was fantastic.

I like that

Thank you!